Travelers

Edit: I WON the contest!!!!
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I know I'm a day to late But this will (should) be my contest entry for =Lilafly's "Deleted scenes" contest -> lilafly.deviantart.com/journal…

But... DAMN! It's finally finished! It took me the whole day yesterday. And some hours today. AND I ENJOYED EVERY F***NG SECOND! Of course the designs of Bee and Vali are damn difficult but, the loves challenges
Okay, now to my drawings content... Here you can see 's OC's Vali (right) and 's Bumblebee (black, middle). The filly in the background is =Lilafly's OC, too. The little spirit Caily. (my "Deleted" story follows below)
Indeed I'm a little bit proud of this one I gave my best I have, 'cause I want to win a picture!
And jus one short little thing to my "drawing-horses-thing". I don't know if you gonna see a difference between my earlier horse-style. But I do ^^ I guess I improved a little bit. I won't draw horses that often in future anymore, but I guess this style is nothing I have to hide my face because of :3

OKAY! STORY:
"Foolish little girl" Vali grumbled when she left the area of the Caspanas. The young yellow mare asking her for the way to the herd still was in her mind. "How can she guess to be welcome there? They won't let her join anyway!"
"Oh, pleas stop yellin' Vali!" Caily shouted next to her. The spirit filly still followed her older sister.
"You'd better be quiet, Caily! For you it's so much easier! You could stay there, why are you still following me!?"
"Hey, you really miss the herd, don't you?" Caily giggled.
"Oh, please shut up!" Vali screamed and started running. She didn't wanted to show it to her sister, but her eyes hurt and the tears started running down her face. She really did not miss the herd. Just the way they reacted on her... the way they banned her... from any reason it felt like a dagger stabbing her heart. Vali just couldn't stop her feelings anymore.
"Vali?" Vali stopped when she heard the deep voice near her. It was a sound touching her soul every single time when it came to hear ears. She looked around and saw Bee standing there next to the trees. "Vali? Hon, what happened? You're crying." His face was kind of worried.
Vali just couldn't control herself. "Oh, Bee!" She went to him and hugged him. She just cried and felt Bee putting his head at her shivering neck. Slowly she calmed down and the tears dried. "The herd banned me. I coldn't control myself... I attacked them... I..." Valis voice stopped.
"It's okay hon." Bee whispered. His voice felt like balm for the mares soul. "It's okay. I'm with you. For ever. And so for now, we are travelers."


Vali, Caileigh © =Lilafly
Bumblebee © ~AppyNinja
many references used,
eg. venomxbaby.deviantart.com/art/… © *venomxbaby for Bees Pose
Don't steal anything!!!